Date: 20 Jan 2010 14:01 Title: Chapter 14
What an awesome end of chapter! Assist me and live, interfere and die! Love it!
A really interesting opening, as well, with the very sci-fiesque encounter and further vision of the officer seemingly vaporised in the previous installment. You gave it a real Arthur C Clarke edge to it, or maybe Baxter. Thought that was really well written.
And interesting to get some further background on Sandhurst, although Pava shouldn't have forced his hand that way.
Can't wait to see what comes next!
I'm glad the scene with Dunleavy in the other dimension came across well. Pava definitely stepped over the line with Donald, but as he's just come out of a defacto coma, he might deserve a bit of slack. But only a bit. ;-) Thanks for commenting!