Date: 10 Apr 2011 11:31 Title: Chapter 8
Uh oh...a spatial rift? Down on the planet? Doesn't sound like a good situation one bit! Plazzi's response was great. We also get some nice background on two interesting characters, Lightner and Juneau. I agree with Lightner; watching the automated controls keep the ship in orbit DOES sound boring!
It's the curse of the helm officer... when the ship's at relative 'stop' life becomes tedious. Thank you for the feedback! As for the spatial rift, agreed, they seldom herald the arrival of anything good.
Date: 21 Dec 2009 09:34 Title: Chapter 8
Wow. A spatial rift?! Cool!! :)
I really liked the opening to this chapter, with the POV of Ensign Lightner - he seems like a really interesting part of this crew, with the same difficult path as the rest, and some baggage to deal with.
And I am getting seriously interested by the character of Olivia Juneau - I want to know what this alter-ego is and whether she is aware of it!
Another cracking chapter!
Much obliged. :-D I'm gratified that you're enjoying the story.
Date: 11 Aug 2009 22:46 Title: Chapter 8
31. Section 31 perhaps? Now we know for sure the culprit for the planting of the device in the previous story, but we still don't fully know why.
It's not looking as though the partially fried scientist will be able to give a lot of answers to this greater mystery, but I suppose time will tell!
Clues abound, but will any of the crew be able to piece them together? Thanks for the review!