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Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 18:01 Title: Chapter 9

Quite engaging - and I hope to see more of these folks. But with calmer character development, I think - so that the action can subside a bit for more conversation, to get to know these people better (which I think would keep readers such as myself from getting confused). You write an engaging story.

Keep it up.

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