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Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 17:14 Title: Chapter 5

Forgive me, but I'm a bit lost.

It's a little difficult for me to follow which ships belong to which species (the Tyrannus for the Gorn is a nice touch), or who is on which side. To my reading, it appears as if Yoshida and Wilkes ended up on opposite sides of the battle, and I suspect that isn't the case.

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