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Reviewer: cai20160116 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2016 19:03 Title: Act 4

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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 21:08 Title: Act 8

Aak!  Don't leave it there!  Must...write...more.

Loving Robert's cameo, and am dying to find out if this Jim West is anything like his namesake.  Might we also see an appearance by Doctor Loveless, aka Alexander to us Trekkies? ;-)  A girl can only hope...

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 20:33 Title: Act 7

This boss Santorini sounds like an interesting fellow.  Can't wait for the dinner with the three goons.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 20:27 Title: Act 6

"Damn.  Klingons hit hard."  Another great tongue-in-cheek line.  I would've liked her ripping a chunk from her skirt to bandage Rick's hand...using the nursing skills she learned...at the art college.  Hawh!!



Author's Response: I actually wrote that, but thought that would be too obvious.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 20:14 Title: Act One

Geez - that was like The Three Stooges meet Joe Friday.  Hilarious, and effective.  I'm very much enjoying this light-hearted romp that doesn't take itself too seriously.  Onward and upward. ;-)



Author's Response: This has been a lot of fun to write, I am glad people are enjoying it and appreciating it. What better guys to rough up the hero than three Klingon mobsters?

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 19:58 Title: Act 4

"We don't serve your kind here."

"Humans?" I asked.

"Dicks."

Hilarious, on a number of levels.

Let's see where Shelley's lead takes him.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 19:49 Title: Act 3

I agree - the Arts college line was classic. :D  Very interested to see where it goes from here.

 

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 19:42 Title: Act 2

And the plot thickens. ;)

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 19:30 Title: Act One

You've certainly captured the feel of the PI movies from the 40's and 50's.  Nice start--I'm intrigued.  Off to read more now.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2012 08:53 Title: Act 8

Uh, oh, trouble!

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 08:34 Title: Act 7

Don't get involved with clients!

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 07:12 Title: Act 6

Well, at least she didn't rip a tourniquet from the hem of her skirt!



Author's Response: That was my first thought, and I was gonna go there, but thought against it. I made the right choice.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 15:03 Title: Act 5

That bomb has about the longest fuse - EVER. I loved all the reasons why it couldn't be thrown this way or that way. Baby ducks?!



Author's Response: Thanks. I figure if this were filmed the bomb scene would be less than a couple minutes, but in written form it takes longer. The bomb scene was a nod to Batman from 1966 where Batman was trying to unload a bomb in the same way. I was als0 inspired by the football fight from Flash Gordon. Smitty really comes out in this chapter, and it was too fun to have him act as a caddy when Dylan was hitting the bomb like a golf ball.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 08:16 Title: Act 4

The first rule of hte Tribble Fight Club: No One Talks About the Tribble Fight Club!!!

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 14:34 Title: Act 3

“I was thinking I need to take some classes at the Art College.” - another awesome line.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 14:31 Title: Act 2

OOoooh the plot thickens.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 08:18 Title: Act One

"I lit it, took a puff and blew smoke into the air because the place needed more atmosphere." - Epic!

I also adored the coconuts line.

Ready for more!!



Author's Response: Thanks. When I heard the call for a Crimes Challenge, I instantly thought old detective movie. In addition to trek, I love old pulp novels, comics and film noir. I also thought this would give me a chance to do something different. the coconut line is borrowed from Phil Hartman...he said it in an SNL audition and I did it as tribute to him.

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