Date: 19 Jul 2012 08:50 Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. A lot of sex going on, but hey...it keeps it human. I'm not sure if this a sequel to another story, or if this is a unique story to its own. But I hope you go into the science as to how they know what the "true" past is supposed to look like.
Thanks! It's a sequel but I try to keep them fairly stand-alone so that the reader doesn't have to go back and read a bajillion words in order to get what I'm talking about.
There's a little on the science and, well, it's imperfect. So how can you really know?