Date: 30 Apr 2012 16:47 Title: Time for tea
Don't think Captain Picard ever went this many rounds with a replicator to get his beloved brew.
This man is determined. Like Janeway, nothing comes between him and his beverage of choice. Tea. Earl Grey Hot.
Author's Response: Wilcox is a little stubborn at times, and often set in his ways. a bit like me, nothing comes between him and a earl grey tea. thanks for the feedback.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 13:49 Title: Time for tea
Captains and their tea! Good one! Thank God I don't drink tea or coffee so I will never have to suffer this!
Author's Response: I have to suffer this everytime my wife makes a cup of tea and I do love my cuppa. she stews it so much. thanks for the feedback.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 10:22 Title: Time for tea
I don't suppose he could threaten to not tip the replicator, eh? :)
Great, vivid story - wonderful economy of words.
Author's Response: I once had a chinese arrive three hours after ordering (despite phoning them a few times) the delivery man asked where his tip was. I told him when I ordered it and he said it was not his fault. thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 18 Apr 2012 04:57 Title: Cobbled Together by jespah
Has it really come to this, broccoli for dessert? Enterprise is in trouble alright.
Mighty nice gesture at the end.
Thanks! I wanted him to kind of give up his slender grasp on order in exchange for his unnatural lust for the artificial pineapple flavoring, but at the same time, do something kind.
Date: 17 Apr 2012 15:10 Title: Cobbled Together by jespah
Oh wow. Love it jespah. I loved this episode of ENT and I can clearly picture this - as I so often do when you write an ENT scene. It seems like this were a cutting room floor edit. It should have happened this way. Hoshi and Reed screentime - with pineapple continuity. It has it all. Love it. It's a 'sweet' deal. Ok, bad pun.
Date: 17 Apr 2012 14:38 Title: Chapter 1 - Miranda Fave - McGregor gets shafted
Oh no! I can just imagine the next line is MacGregor saying, "I'm fine, thanks for askin' (hic!)!"
Hee, hee. Yeah it could easily have been. I was maybe going to have it be:
Molly: Are you alright?
McGregor: I'm fine. I'm just all shook up.