Date: 01 Apr 2012 22:40 Title: Chapter 1
It really was as to be expected of a honeymoon couple. Loving. Tender. Sweet. Well done. I liked too how we did get a sense of the bond between the pair, as well as a few insights into their Andorian nature without a heavyhanded approach to the details. Nicely judged and conveyed.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 00:18 Title: Chapter 1
A wonderful look at a couple hopelessly in love, and determined to make others in their lives who might not be so accepting see it and finally come to understand it. Love your writing style - it flowed smoothly, easily conjuring up the images you described. Another great fit for the challenge that left me sighing and awwing at the end. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a great challenge...I've a tendency towards dark writing when it comes to Star Trek, so I loved being tasked with writing something happy.