Date: 28 Mar 2012 02:46 Title: Chapter 1
It is evident that you have a good understanding of the person of Weyoun, and you did a good job of expressing the fears and worries that his character would be vulnerable to, especially considering what his predecessor was like. To understand a character's mind and express their innermost thoughts can be a challenge, but you did it wonderfully here. I also like how the story flows very well, with a definite beginning, climax and conclusion. Well done
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Weyoun's been my favourite Star Trek character for thirteen years now so I've been thinking about what might go on in his head for a long time.