Date: 06 Jan 2012 08:16 Title: Chapter 1
I was not surprised at all that Weyoun had told Damar what kind of poisons would affect him, because with the Vorta being immune to most of poisons, Damar had to know what to use. And at the same time I am surprised Weyoun told Damar anything; they never trusted each other and telling your enemy what could kill you--or make you very sick--is like Data telling everyone where his off switch is.
I "like" how intoxicated Damar acted and tortured Weyoun. I know, "like" is not exactly the word, but it was very well written and I could almost see the whole scene in front of me. Cardassians know how to humiliate their victims and vulnerable Weyoun is exactly that--a victim. All this just leads to a deadly end, but Damar didn't let the opportunity slip away and had to enjoy himself by tormenting his most hated enemy.
You drew images with words and put a lot of emotions into the characters, making them very real. This is an outstanding story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! This is not the sort of thing that I normally write, so I'm glad to hear that the torture stuff works. The loathing between Damar and Weyoun is so delicious...imagining it erupting into physical violence is not all that difficult. Thanks again!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 15:40 Title: Chapter 1
That was brilliant. Damar being that disgusting when drunk seems very plausible, and I like the 'gap in Weyoun's memory' which means Weyoun will never know that it was Damar who first poisoned him, and then assaulted him. Nice story-telling, the prose really flowed.
Author's Response: Thank you! I actually wrote this many years ago and then ferreted it away on my computer, and it only recently saw the light of day after some revision. Weyoun's memory gap was something I added...glad I did!