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Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 06:42 Title: Chapter 3

Poor Dan. Kave's probably right though, the dude seems to nice to work security. It's why I never bought Neelix as a security officer in Voyager ... there needs to be a certain toughness there. Maybe Dan has it but I don't see it yet.

Still, Kave doesn't need to be such a dick about it.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2011 23:33 Title: Chapter 3

Ah, now it makes sense why he's called Pots (that had been confusing earlier).

Ha, I have a Chef in my stories as well. I like how they are very good for helping readers relate to a crew.



Author's Response: I thought it made sense as a nickname for the ship's cook! :) I hadn't really thought of Danterian as being a way to relate to the crew - you'll see that he has quite an extensive plotline throughout the series - in fact you could say he's the main character. Still, I hope he does also serve as a way in to this crew for the reader. Thanks again for the comments!

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