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Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 06:23 Title: Prologue

An interesting set up. I like the idea of "Gods" bargaining with the lives of others. The imagery and tone you got here is also quite good, very vivid. Let's see where this leads.

Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2012 00:52 Title: Prologue

You said something, I think, about keeping writing if people reviewed your work. Well keep writing! You've got a good thing going here, and sometimes people don't always review stories, even when they are brilliant. I don't know what your state is regarding the chapters of this story you have not published yet, but don't let other people's silence put you off!

You've got a good, intriguing story, and I don't want to see it this incomplete!

Reviewer: Ln X Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 23:45 Title: Prologue

BRILLIANT! This boggles my mind, but you have such an awesome plot premise! Very good!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm glad you like the premise, of course the important thing is whether I can pull it off... :)

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 23:19 Title: Prologue

Interesting beginning, and the idea of a Voyager-style wandering, directed by godlike beings, is intriguing. Very evocative of the Odyssey.

Author's Response: Thanks jespah, glad it caught your attention

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