Date: 11 Jan 2012 00:52 Title: Prologue
You said something, I think, about keeping writing if people reviewed your work. Well keep writing! You've got a good thing going here, and sometimes people don't always review stories, even when they are brilliant. I don't know what your state is regarding the chapters of this story you have not published yet, but don't let other people's silence put you off!
You've got a good, intriguing story, and I don't want to see it this incomplete!