Date: 16 Feb 2009 03:51 Title: Step Three: Don't Waste Time (Or Learn from My Mistakes)
What a sweet wrap. I really love the fact you have married starship captains. I look forward to the day they both want to slow down enough to have kids, but hey, they're wonderful as they are now. Nice work (and great titles/subtitles!)
Date: 16 Feb 2009 03:45 Title: Step Two - Become Friends (Warning: May be Easier Said Than Done)
::happy sighs:: So sweet. I love Tristan's internal voice, too. And the whole process he's going through -- the ship, then friends, then the woman he'll marry. I'd love to see it from Beth's POV someday too.
Author's Response: Thanks SL!! Maybe Beth's side of it will fall out of me one day?!
Date: 15 Feb 2009 00:09 Title: Step One: Lose Motor Function and Key Communication Skills the Moment You See Her
A few minor issues with the Irish accent, but what a sweet story! I love the inside look at Tristan's head, I really do. Are you gonna put this in the challenge? It's a perfect fit!
Author's Response: I want to tighten it up and post the next two steps...but yes...it's for the challenge. - So EXPECT EDITS!! :)